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    Posted: March 16 2007 at 5:57pm

I just recently found out that my grandpa in Jamaican had a stroke. This verse is dedicated to him.

Aye grandpa
 
Hell no! I gotta break free.
The devil got a strong grip hold on me.
Im tired of the hurt,Im tired of the pain.
So many loses.So little gain.
Im losing my peace.Im going insane.
Im turning into a beast,one which cant be tamed.
Im got so many burndens on my shoulders,so i gotta let some steam off.
So thats why im spittin these rhymes, so i can kick some steam off.
But life is so precious, i cant give up now!
So lord keep me,only before you i bow.
Grandpa,where ever you are,you will stay in my heart. So know you not far!
Grandpa i love you wit all my heart,when god says he's ready. Ill miss the day you part
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Its time to get em
Its only ink on paper,but im bout to hurt your feelings
ouch,im so high that i hit my head on da ceiling
im so humble,so watch me stay calm
cant be calm foreva.so im a bomb.. sorry but it wasnt a false alarm
Intruder alert,you in my territory
fall bak,cuz if u dont.. wont be no happy endin for your life story
And thats real talk
I keep it real,make it hard for you to talk.Believe thats real talk.
Im so hard,that i spit rocks. So call it a metoroid shower.I got you taking a bath in my spit.ha. thats wut i call a shower
my presence is like a laxitive.. got u talkin sh*t
im hot,u flammable.. fall bak fa ya  get lit


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I'm very sorry for you man I haven't lost a family member yet so all I have to say is stay strong.Cry
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he aint dead.. i wrote the poem b4 i knew he wasnt dead.. cuz i was like damn mad as hell..
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Oh my bad.
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