They call me Tom Brokaw The greatest newscaster alive
Perfect attire without any flaw I'm retired so I don't come on at five
I used to report the latest news And now I'm reporting it on a wave board
My news isn't like Lou Dobbs (it値l make you snooze) Plus this should make a one hit record
So next time you see me I値l be rich And I値l have all the ladies
And you値l be scratching your head like a jock itch And I値l be like Oprah giving every female a Mercedes
Just had to spit a little something, something.
Your flow iz aight but I really wanna know why you came to this forum.... Don't you have better things to do than come online to talk to wavers...It just don't go together
I'm here to help you "wavers" attain better waves. I assure you that my team only gives the best of wave advices or my name isn't Tom Brokaw.
They call me Tom Brokaw The greatest newscaster alive
Perfect attire without any flaw I'm retired so I don't come on at five
I used to report the latest news And now I'm reporting it on a wave board
My news isn't like Lou Dobbs (it値l make you snooze) Plus this should make a one hit record
So next time you see me I値l be rich And I値l have all the ladies
And you値l be scratching your head like a jock itch And I値l be like Oprah giving every female a Mercedes
Just had to spit a little something, something.
Your flow iz aight but I really wanna know why you came to this forum.... Don't you have better things to do than come online to talk to wavers...It just don't go together
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Im New to the Game like Lebron James Taking Niggas outa the game Like MJ Destroying Niggas with one punch Like Ron Artest Shooting lights out like a three point contest I told Niggas the Armegeddon has arrive Cutting up Niggas like a slice of pie Waves making girls seasick Making Braids go out of style like a pair of Kicks I aint about to bring harmony and peace Im about to bring the heat to ya niece Im a cold blooded killa like Scarface Splattering Niggas brains out like paste I have a License to Kill Making girls feel like their on ecstasy without the pill My Guns got Dual Action Making you see double the allusion You think you hard Ill Swipe ya wallet like a Credit Card I aint going to be like god and bring you life Im about to be like the devil and end ya life
I was Bored felt like freestyling "FeedBack"
it wuz weak
u wanted feedback...
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
Im New to the Game like Lebron James Taking Niggas outa game Like MJ Destroying Niggas with one punch Like Ron Artest Shooting lights out like a three point contest I told Niggas the Armegeddon has arrive Cutting up Niggas like a slice of pie Waves making girls seasick Making Braids go out of style like a pair of Kicks I aint about to bring harmony and peace Im about to bring the heat to ya niece Im a cold blooded killa like Scarface Splattering Niggas brains out like paste I have a License to Kill Making girls feel like there on excasty without the pill My Guns got Dual Action Making you seen double the allusion You think you hard Ill Swipe ya wallet like a Credit Card I aint going to be like god and bring you life Im about to be like the devil and end ya life
Im New to the Game like Lebron James Taking Niggas outa game Like MJ Destroying Niggas with one punch Like Ron Artest Shooting lights out like a three point contest I told Niggas the Armegeddon has arrive Cutting up Niggas like a slice of pie Waves making girls seasick Making Braids go out of style like a pair of Kicks I aint about to bring harmony and peace Im about to bring the heat to ya niece Im a cold blooded killa like Scarface Splattering Niggas brains out like paste I have a License to Kill Making girls feel like there on excasty without the pill My Guns got Dual Action Making you seen double the allusion You think you hard Ill Swipe ya wallet like a Credit Card I aint going to be like god and bring you life Im about to be like the devil and end ya life
Im New to the Game like Lebron James Taking Niggas outa the game Like MJ Destroying Niggas with one punch Like Ron Artest Shooting lights out like a three point contest I told Niggas the Armegeddon has arrive Cutting up Niggas like a slice of pie Waves making girls seasick Making Braids go out of style like a pair of Kicks I aint about to bring harmony and peace Im about to bring the heat to ya niece Im a cold blooded killa like Scarface Splattering Niggas brains out like paste I have a License to Kill Making girls feel like their on ecstasy without the pill My Guns got Dual Action Making you see double the allusion You think you hard Ill Swipe ya wallet like a Credit Card I aint going to be like god and bring you life Im about to be like the devil and end ya life
I was Bored felt like freestyling "FeedBack"
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nigga u wuzzent talkin bout rappers in general so cut that ish mayn u said "y'all" nigga read wut u posted earlier...but neway i gotta get 2 class so nigga f*ck u and have a nice day
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
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quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1freshnicca originally wrote: no beef watsoeva niccas but i can stan when niccas rap bout thangs they aint got it jus sound bad. fo real n another thang i guess punchlines are a part of freestyle but wat yall doin isnt really freestylin cuz u thinkin then typin nah mean. rappers who really get props is who talk bout real thangs not so many punchlines they dun need punchlines fo they flow to be tyte like
whoa there champ yeah so what if im rappin about what i dont have im sayin what i will have(hopefully) and its not possible to "freestyle" typing unless u think as slow as u type...feel me... maybe mase or loon but not me im not gonna explain the process in detail anyway.....the rappers in the game....most of them cant freestyle anyway.....they spit rhymes they already wrote......look @ the booth big tigger had i actually have a little freestyle game.....when i listen to music on the bus or train i just freestyle over it and most of the time its almost as good as my writtens sometimes even better because its a natural flow
i talk about real things too.....as people will see these rhymes are for the board only....i dont go that hard for this...and i dont even save these
i love punchlines......sue me that doesnt mean that i cant rhyme w/o using them
as for that twista line...it doesnt even make since thug apostle that will pop u? but it has nuthin to do with religion collosile to fossil please.......that aint heat
but at the end of the day u got the right to your opinion u think my punchlines are whack 1. i think about something, then i have a punchline for it in 3 secs literally, its easy 2.thanks.....thats just gonna make me work a little bit harder
but please dont judge me....these rhymes are just a preview not anything i would lay down on wax so dont judge young foch cuz nigga u dont know-me
ey dawg i neva said nething bout ya punchlines...i said rappers in general..u know these rap boards thats all they do is say they freestylin when 90% isnt. u puttin words in my mouth i neva once said ya punchlines was wack or u couldnt rhyme witout em and i neva said u aint got a freestlyle game i dun even know u how imma talk shyt about u dawg...newayz ya ish that ya workin on daz u gonna lay down im guessin u pry wouldnt even put it on herr so ya raps on here pry say little bout wat u really tryna do wit ur game...nah mean...i wasnt tryna start no beef....n if ya read my otha posts i already said ya flow was tyte...n im sorry if u takin offence to me sayin that i dun like when people rap bout stuff dey dont have it wasnt directed at only u homie...every rapper..thas jus my opinion...
oh yea maybe dat twista line wasnt tha best example fo wat im tryna say but just tha point dat he dont use a bunch of punchlines n his shyt still flow killa ...dat Kill us all IS tyte or mayb it jus how twista do it ...dat nicca could say nething in his raps n it still sound tyte..
dez r jus my opinion not pointed at ne1 person so dont take offence unless u feel like u r tha person im talkin bout that has wack punchlines and rhymes and say they freestylin when they typin n all dat otha ish...ok
..ya feel me
fresh "ya da trigga jus might get squeezed, n tha slugs will skip ova ya waves just like jet skiz"
1freshnicca i respect your opinion......nah im lyin because i cant respect your opinion if i dont respect your judgement and dat bullsh!t line you put in ya post and den said it was fire showed me exactly wut type of taste u have and now that i kno i dont appeal to lame nigguhs ill give myself a pat on da back.
lizame as$ nigguh here are some more punchlines for you
and nigguh I don稚 run out when its drama I pull da gun out lay ya daughter and son out go ta parks and empty tha fun out u shook sayin why gifted had ta come out u should run now cuz its dark u losin sun now got guns now make u a spirit 4 u get one out picture me carin what anotha nigguh thinks cuz ill be on top b4 anotha nigguh blinks 9 times outta 10 the otha nigguh stinks so if u cant box freshnicca step outta da ring
u dont like tha way we rhyme, dont read tha thread cuddie...itz that simple...
and read wut u just wrote homie...we typin this ish into a computer so of course it aint gon be a real-life "freestyle" since u wanna get all technical wit it...and nigga i been rappin since i could put a sentence 2gether so dont come at me talkin bout how U like hearin tha sh*t cuz i aint even gon entertain that nonsense...we just in hear tryin 2 display talents and if i included some punchlines then sue me...this aint no LP nigga we aint gotta say it how u like 2 hear it we wuz just havin fun wit it...even twista said tha thread wuz nice last nite...so nigga im like who tha F*CK r u?? name one rapper thatz ill that dont use punchlines and dont even tryta comeback sayin "well thatz tha only lyrical element u use" cuz only about 40% of my flowz were metaphors i know wut tha f*ck i wrote nigga...
u done crossed a real lyricist nigga watch yo step in here...1
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
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