lol. It was aight. I liked the vocab and the technique but the theme threw me off. I guess I thought it was gone be alil deeper than what it was. Still it was okay. The last phrase is dumb funny.
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to tsoh i jus got out of that situation and i feel u COMPLETELY fam! but on the bright side theres other fish in the sea... schools of em. ull find another seriously. love does suck tho, its good when its good, but when its bad, u wanna kill her lol. good luck tho
on topic tho, HOT DROP cash! u had a dream u slayed the devil with the staff of moses? ....and to think i dream about dancing sugarplums and rainbows made of skittles....im ashamed of myself lol. man u should c my daydreams, there was a song about it (NO NOT LUPE'S)
"Happy Peanuts whole over chocolate covered mountaintops... and waterfalls of caaaaaramelllllll prancing nougats in the middle sings a song of satisfaction toooooo the worrrllllllldddd..... the world..."
lmao most of my daydreamz r like that
im gettin there
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Ummmmmmm I don't exactly know ya situation tsoh....but one thing I did when I was having some problems with my girl.....I sent her a cd with all the songs I felt best described her/and our relationship/and how I felt about her.....it worked....maybe u can try that
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Lmao tsoh gonna be in the court rhymin like common in his video lol.....just do like jigga said...."if you feeling like a pimp nig go and brush ya shoulders offfff"
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lol. It was aight. I liked the vocab and the technique but the theme threw me off. I guess I thought it was gone be alil deeper than what it was. Still it was okay. The last phrase is dumb funny.
Naw it wasn't intended to be deep or nothing. I just had a dream the other day and deciced to put it into a poetic form.
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I know I'm off topic but here's another poem by King Cash Tell me what ya think...
I had a dream that I died and went to Limbo (the place between Heaven and Hell). Luckily, God made me an offer…He said that I could come with him to heaven and earn my wings if I go down into hell and lead his angels in a war against the devil and his demons. To make a long story short, I got lost and separated from the angels during the battle so I was alone in hell!
As I clutched a cross and a crossbow that’s BRANDISHED IN GOLD
I was stepping on burnt out coal that was RANCID AND OLD
My shivers started to fade as the heat VANISHED THE COLD
While planning on attacking demons to BANISH THEIR SOULS For these creatures, all types of love has GROWN IRRELAVANT
And hatred is the food that fuels these DRONE’S DEVELOPMENT
I heard war sirens that sounded like the MOANS OF ELEPHANTS
So I ducked and hid behind stacks of BONES AND SEDIMENT.
I felt footsteps of that army that’s KNOWN AS DEVIL’S MEN
So I concentrated, clutched to my BOW, -N- SETTLED IN
To the image of God...stuck in a ZONE OF SELEVANCE
Then I ROAMED THIS SETTLEMENT full of THRONES OF SKELETONS
I reached the devil’s domicile…a DARKENED DISEASED PIT
Then I STARTED TO BREATHE QUICK as I CHARGED IN ON THESE PRICKS
That’s when I saw the devil…he was GUARDED BY BEAST WHICH
Were huge, so I pulled my weapon and STARTED TO SWING QUICK
I was overcome with hatred and PART OF ME SEIZED IT
So I hit ‘em with my wooden staff’s SHARPENED AND SHEENED TIPS
Yea I stabbed the devil…opened his HEART WITH A CLEAN SLIT.
With the same staff that Moses once had PARTED THE SEAS WIT’.
Lucifer’s dead!!! So heaven had a VAST PARADE -N- ALL
It kind of looked like a fairy tale’s MASQUERADE -N- BALL
God looked at me and saw my HEAD FULL OF CONCERNS -N- THINGS
Then he said, “you don’t need a RED BULL CUZ YOU’VE EARNED YA WINGS!”
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