Thank you SO much, Stephannie! And thanx for reading! :) :) :)
Love, Inge
If I had wings then I could take you in I'd stay on the ground and show you some things The grass is strewn with blades of gold all sights and sounds I have been told all hopes, desires, seem to sing
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Great poetry! You seem like a pretty wild chick what with your many earrings, short cropped hair and your writing! Obviously people are into what you write, you get positive responses. Are you sure you`re only a broad in high school? You seem pretty free and loose for a gal that age. Of course I met a few wild girls when I was that age. You`re still jail bait as far as the Metal man is concerned however.
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Hey! Thanx soooo much for reading & responding!! I`m very glad that you liked it!! :) Lady Maria- I mostly just write poetry. I`ve tried to write a couple of short stories & other stuff, but its difficult and I don`t think they`re very good. I love writing poetry, tho- mostly I just do it for myself (and so most of it isnt very good :)), but I`ve tried to get it published in a couple of places and entered some poetry contests and stuff. This one got published in my school`s fine arts collection this year :) Dance is my true love, tho; ballet, step, hip-hop, etc. Not that I`m great at all of them, but I like to try to learn as many styles as possible. I`m trying to teach myself to bellydance- it`s harder than it looks! Metal Man- hehehehehe you crack me up! Yeah, I`m pretty sure I`m in high school (unless this is all some bad dream!). Its funny that you think I`m wild and `free and loose`- I`m actually kind of a wallflower. A total wallflower, actually. That`s why I like writing on the computer- no stuttering or nervousness or sweaty palms! The earrings aren`t that wild- lots of girls that I know have as many or more than I do. The cropped hair is more a result of being frustrated and nervous about how it looks all the time- less hair is less to worry about, I guess, altho now I`m nervous about it being too short and looking like a boy. Anyway, thanx for responding & reading my poem. Maybe its good that I`m still `jail bait`- it sounds like the Metal Man is a little too wild for me! :) :)
Lotsa Love, Inga
PS- Metal Man; not that I`m offended, but girls don`t usually like to be referred to as `broads`. Just a note for future reference. :)
If I had wings then I could take you in I'd stay on the ground and show you some things The grass is strewn with blades of gold all sights and sounds I have been told all hopes, desires, seem to sing
Ingrid, The Metal man only calls very cool women that he totally respects "broads", it`s a blue collar, working man expression, no offense intended. I don`t believe for a minute you are a wallflower, the Metal man knows chicks, you got brains and guts. And a good lookin women with short hair don`t look like no boy, she looks like a good lookin mama with short hair ! The Metal man likes the ladies all kinda ways, with long or short hair, tall or short, whatever. Either a woman has it or she don`t. And half of it is the attitude of the woman, you know, her confidence , how she struts her stuff! Put on your sexiest dress Ingrid, your best jewelry and mascara, you know like the downtown ladies do. Strut your stuff little sister, you are some fine young flower just a waitin to bloom, I`m sure! The Metal man knows these things!
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If I had wings then I could take you in I'd stay on the ground and show you some things The grass is strewn with blades of gold all sights and sounds I have been told all hopes, desires, seem to sing
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