Droppin Bars(Off Topic)

I used to rhyme but i aint done it in a while anyway i decided to start up again when ppl were telling me my old **** was fire so i thought id make a post where id drop 8 bars(others can 2) and tell me what yall think:

im tryna get this cream
and i dont need to talk about maks and triple beams
that aint a game to play
you gonna end up like denzel bloodied up on training day
coz im cool nigga dont mistake weakness in this man
when therse beef you can dance do the shake or running man
you own girl say im the best plus i give to her raw
have street kids like ollie twist-please can we have some more