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    Posted: March 09 2007 at 1:25am
Hello everyone...let me introduce you to someone:


My dad's name's William...Call him PILE FOR SHORT.
Yea, a pile of sh*t...Excuse my WILD RETORTS
But WHILE I SORT through these old FILED REPORTS
I'm finding out he didn't fight for his CHILD IN COURT
CHILD SUPPORT is how he shows his CHILD SUPPORT
He wasn't there to ever see his only CHILD IN SPORTS
His SMILE IS FORCED. Lookin like a SMILIN DORK
He was always a sorry dad but worse WHILE DIVORCED
I don't miss him at all...I just BITTERLY HATE THIS
He broke my mom's heart so I want to LITERALLY BREAK HIS
If I'm a HEATHEN THAT'S FINE. I ain't DELETIN THAT LINE
Cuz all I'm doin is thinkin back and SPEAKIN MY MIND
And just SPEAKIN OF TIMES that my FATHER WASN'T THERE
And how I realized that my FATHER DOESN'T CARE
From him, I've never even GOTTEN A CHRISTMAS PRESENT
Therefore, my feelings are too ROTTEN TO MISS HIS PRESENCE
Don't feel sorry for me...I'm used to him BE-IN ABSENT
I'm thinkin back 5 years ago...I ain't SEEN HIS ASS SINCE
Since he ain't RIGHTIN HIS WRONGS I'm right here WRITIN THIS SONG
And usin my pen as a sword cuz I'm a TITAN THAT'S STRONG
But I'm bout to LOSE MY COOL and just be RUDE N CRUEL
Cuz he's feedin my flames -n- fire wit a FUSE -N- FUEL
Attend his FUNERAL??? Naw...I hope HE'LL EXPECT IT
Cuz I wanna show him how it feels...to FEEL NEGLECTED!!!



Happy Father's Day!!! lol

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lol o sh*t..happy fathers day??
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yal got more in common than you think huh... u and cash
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aye i feel dat boy ...so u be rappin huh?   i been writin music since i was about in six grade and i love this sh*t wit a passion no joke i write just like i brush my hair......at first i was on dat rappin bout money and cars and all dat but i had to switch it up cause i like to be unique u feel me...and just by hearin yo poem i can tell u aint just start writin u been in it for a min ........but.....i got somthin for u check me out...

 

GET AWAY

From the start of my birth i had dreams to depature from earth
my heat is the curse and i understand more the harder i search
 
these women and men will burn i acknowlege that there infernal
the clever will learn i wish to get away and never return
 
away from these fellas with germs and the devils consern
how could you fail at a mission which was never confirm
 
wht eva the term //may be its a leason to earn
bad farther make me wish  my mother neglected the sperm
 
now im a serious man,,,,,, searchin for a superior land
so serious that i sommon this ulterior plan
 
i realize i can be wht eva my carrer in my hand
weather its hear or japan i presevere for the grand
 
get a year and advance then disapear off in france'
never fearin to glance im volunterring to chance
 
study life somthin like a engineer with his plans
i understand that im hear to expand ((and get away))
 
i AINT GONE POST TOO MUCH BUT IM WORKIN ON MY NEXT MIXTAPE RIGHT NOW U FEEL ME ......AND I GOT SOME OF MY OLD PUNCH LINE ISH ON MYSPACE GO CHECK ME OUT DARE
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hit me up on the pm if u be hittin up the stuido and sh*t and we can drop somthin no bullsh*t real talk
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dat grew up a screw up iz nnice
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want me downlaod yyo sh*t get u out therE?
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YEAA GO HEAD BRO DO DAT FOR ME ........PRCIATE DAT
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KING CASH your poem is deep fam, by the way great word play. My story is different from yours and tsoh but its similar not the same.

I grew up with 2parents but it always felt like one (momdukes). My pops is there but he isn't there. Granted he was there for my basketball games, baseball games, etc. but he wasent there during the high school years.

After I entered college he was there once again but not there. He doesn't show interest in me, probably cause he sees too much of his self in me. But I don't know thats just me, it may not sound as bad as not having a father around for no point in your life, but its like I have a father but I dont have a dad.
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i feel ya boysss.....but if u did have da problems that u have now then it would be somthin else wrong....it just life u feel...and we got to keep on rollin ...and cash i feel u cause  we both got that talent of a poetry and to put our thought on paper which helps alot
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Thanx people! By the way here's a link to my beats:
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=371885

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ehh..wutz dun is dun..i feel yall pain..buh wutz important now is dat yall dun let ya own kidz grow up wit out a daddy..
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real talk!

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