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Printed Date: September 29 2025 at 11:03pm


Topic: A poem
Posted By: Unregistered Guest
Subject: A poem
Date Posted: January 12 2000 at 2:04am
Just a little Weekend thought in prose:I look at her beauty that Aura about her I am awed by her presence which makes my heart stirShe had short hair And was shy very much But that smile was something But I wasn't muchYet she saw something in me Which to this day I know not what I just can't sayShes now changed her appearance Her hair incredibly long Shes grown more beautiful I have not gone wrong.And still when I look at her And bask in her presence My heart still skips a beat With the glow of her essenceThe golden blonde hair that flows past her waist It flips over shoulders The bangs done with tasteHer complexion so milky The smile is brighter Her eyes full of laughter The teeth are much whiterYet all her appearance are just like sprue The most beautiful parts lie inward and trueThere lies what I need What I want and what I love Its her warmth, the caring that descends like a doveOn my life she sheds promise That hope in a future Its her dreams and her drive Which she constantly nurturesI hope that I May someday inspire To be so wonderful and caring as to light her fireFill life with passion Embrace it with might Love, Care and share And become her bright light.Take Care AllSteve



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Posted By: sandra
Date Posted: January 12 2000 at 2:04am
Steve,Your poem is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.Sandra> Just a little Weekend thought in prose:> I look at her beauty that Aura about her> I am awed by her presence which makes my heart> stir> She had short hair And was shy very much> But that smile was something But I wasn't much>> Yet she saw something in me Which to this> day I know not what I just can't say> Shes now changed her appearance Her hair> incredibly long Shes grown more beautiful I have> not gone wrong.> And still when I look at her And bask in> her presence My heart still skips a beat With> the glow of her essence> The golden blonde hair that flows past her> waist It flips over shoulders The bangs done with> taste> Her complexion so milky The smile is brighter> Her eyes full of laughter The teeth are much whiter>> Yet all her appearance are just like sprue> The most beautiful parts lie inward and true> There lies what I need What I want and what> I love Its her warmth, the caring that descends> like a dove> On my life she sheds promise That hope in> a future Its her dreams and her drive Which she> constantly nurtures> I hope that I May someday inspire To be so> wonderful and caring as to light her fire> Fill life with passion Embrace it with might> Love, Care and share And become her bright light.>> Take Care All> Steve

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