this kid killin these cats they gon need mad nursin/ eat niggaz over tha screen or we can do it in person/ im 1st in it all, i dont need no placement/ i murder tha booth, now you wonder y tigga left tha basement/ this yung lyricist gotta lyricist sound/ my wordsworth more than you, fuk a lyrcist lounge/ ive been ready, still dont kno wut i gotta wait for/ dawg i been on my grind and i dont even skateboard/ when im in tha room, niggaz kno they split in hurry/ came in wit a bad ***** booty thicker than murry's/ this rap game will never get too old/ and if u feel tha heat that i spit it'll never get too cold/ gotta dream for a place in tha source/ bout how im layin down tracks without a car on tha course/ juss turned 17 tryna finish a demo/ bout 2 graduate dawg to a seat in a lemo/
You might catch the King with a singer/ but touchin my doorbell's the only way I put a ring on your finger/-Lloyd Banks
nigga do you see this bent? its the reason i stay with 5 dimes like im 50 cent on every coast Foch gettin respect and aint no beef cuz the waves on my east and west sides, they connect your sister's @ss on the regular im lacin so its feels more pressure than game winning shots at the end of regulation and heres a revalation this a sample, foch skills bout to rise in elevation so i got all these fellas waitin for me to post some music while about 5 niggas is hatin as far as the 5th he mad cuz i took all of his chips the 4th suffered the same fate as hakeem on the 4th the 3rd is mad cuz i stay shuttin him down with my words the 2nd fell back soon as Flow drew his weapon the 1st went from riding in the rear of a hearse autopsy done by his moms who's a nurse now she cryin cuz her son just became part of the dirt
damn gotta proof read cuz some of it has no flow and would be way off beat(if there was one)
oh well its a freestyle what the F u niggas want for free? - 50 cent
ok yall its almost 3:00 like 50 said on funk flex 2 years ago "i aint gonna sit here rhymin to u niggas all night"
daym....ay yall bustin....man juss think if we wuz to collab .....fab, gift,j mos, and me.....man we be on sum real shyt real talk....none of that makin tha band type shyt tho....haha.....but yea yall niggaz iz flowin tho i aint even gon front.....keep doin wutchall doin....
You might catch the King with a singer/ but touchin my doorbell's the only way I put a ring on your finger/-Lloyd Banks
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J Mos a mad rapper, a rapper gone bad/ like Mac Dre RIP live tha life u never had/ im from cali nigga, had everybody c-walkin/ i freestyle in my sleep, while u niggaz sleep talkin/ so just keep walkin if u a hata get ghost/ and it a typo, J rap better than 'mos'/ ur spot iz questionable, mine iz SEALED in/ im ill enough 2 battle Jay Z wit a nursery rhyme and still win/ or battle eminem wit a bunch of punch lines/ 2 make him start beef and then beat him 2 tha lunchline/ nigga im 4 real, ask yo gurl wut im about/ actually nevermind im still cummin in her mouth/ my bad i had 2 give u tha visual/ gifted wuz right, u cant see me, tha flowz invisible/ young foch, gifted, J Mos n Treezy/ rap like kobe from tha line how we make it look so easy/
damn i gotta start proof readin my ish 2...haha f*ck...
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
haha itz only midnight over here on tha coast...but yeah thatz gon havta be it 4 tonite...thx twist 4 not deletin this ish and lettin us relieve some of this lyrical stress yadadamean? lol...
treezy i'll be in ur group nigga!!
o wait...i already am...LMAO
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
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You ont wanna be da dude wit da flowers on da corner You ont wanna be kid wit da imph pickin on ya You ont wanna be da b@stard cremeated or close casket Im hated i kno faggot don’t debate it my flows magic i lose weight in subways the hood’s JARED bunnies lovin da kid ears dey good carrots haters mugging til shells repeat like good parrots have ya block all over ya body like old maggots cause friction in streets im da hood’s static U get it im good faggot my skills is emphatic And I don’t need ya vote I dictate it u democratic been real forever ya credibility is erratic listen up work on ya flow jus keep at it get on da block work on ya dough jus keep stackin you wanna be u ya whole life den nigguh keep slackin while I play army brat switch states and keep packin j-mos,treezy and fab jus keep rappin rappers so funny dese days dey beats laughin
when i look at the rap game i see myself in two years im the reason niggas girls gettin tattoed tears tryin to break into the industry's time locked safe and dont worry about a thing cuz the glock's on safe a nigga like me walks around like im already a star cuz i got enough bread to buy rounds for every lady at the bar i gotta get on my grind, i aint even workin on my bars alot of haters got sliced, now they workin on they scars i got them jeans with the logo like the mcdonalds arch plus im the reason 50 had to push back his album to march niggas doubt that foch will will make in this game but i got jacob workin on a sign "f*ck dem hatas" on my chain and right now a nigga talkin to the waitress on the plane we up high but she gettin down low to give me brain im not a punchline rapper, foch much deeper but thanks if i wasnt then i guess i'd be another lloyd banks the industry dont realize the talent they gon get how i dont got a single out and im considered a vet niggas like cassidy realize im a casualty cuz im killin the game, nigga its just reality nobody coming close to the skills i possess u couldnt curse my career even if u were possessed in a couple of months imma throw some diamonds on my neck without using advance money, aint no industry checks im sorry if niggas beginning to think im whack but i dont copy no styles and i aint guerilla black im in the hood in queens tryin to get that scrilla back so i can buy trina a crib in southside and every night hit that back compared to me that fat f*ck joey sounds like crack desert storm 06' fab, foch, joey, and stack.....
this is easy holla atcha boy hi hatas soon foch will leave the board and start that music hiatus (and no that wasnt supposed to rhyme) holla black 1
no beef watsoeva niccas but i can stan when niccas rap bout thangs they aint got it jus sound bad. fo real n another thang i guess punchlines are a part of freestyle but wat yall doin isnt really freestylin cuz u thinkin then typin nah mean. rappers who really get props is who talk bout real thangs not so many punchlines they dun need punchlines fo they flow to be tyte like
QUOTE:
"twista will rock you/you dun want a thug apostle to pop you/hostile when i drop you/turnin everythin collosile to fossile"
now THATS strait fire not really a whole bunch a lames ass punch lines thrown togetha..no disrespect jus statin my opinion.
fresh "ya da trigga jus might get squeezed, n tha slugs will skip ova ya waves just like jet skiz"
no beef watsoeva niccas but i can stan when niccas rap bout thangs they aint got it jus sound bad. fo real n another thang i guess punchlines are a part of freestyle but wat yall doin isnt really freestylin cuz u thinkin then typin nah mean. rappers who really get props is who talk bout real thangs not so many punchlines they dun need punchlines fo they flow to be tyte like
whoa there champ yeah so what if im rappin about what i dont have im sayin what i will have(hopefully) and its not possible to "freestyle" typing unless u think as slow as u type...feel me... maybe mase or loon but not me im not gonna explain the process in detail anyway.....the rappers in the game....most of them cant freestyle anyway.....they spit rhymes they already wrote......look @ the booth big tigger had i actually have a little freestyle game.....when i listen to music on the bus or train i just freestyle over it and most of the time its almost as good as my writtens sometimes even better because its a natural flow
i talk about real things too.....as people will see these rhymes are for the board only....i dont go that hard for this...and i dont even save these
i love punchlines......sue me that doesnt mean that i cant rhyme w/o using them
as for that twista line...it doesnt even make since thug apostle that will pop u? but it has nuthin to do with religion collosile to fossil please.......that aint heat
but at the end of the day u got the right to your opinion u think my punchlines are whack 1. i think about something, then i have a punchline for it in 3 secs literally, its easy 2.thanks.....thats just gonna make me work a little bit harder
but please dont judge me....these rhymes are just a preview not anything i would lay down on wax so dont judge young foch cuz nigga u dont know-me
u dont like tha way we rhyme, dont read tha thread cuddie...itz that simple...
and read wut u just wrote homie...we typin this ish into a computer so of course it aint gon be a real-life "freestyle" since u wanna get all technical wit it...and nigga i been rappin since i could put a sentence 2gether so dont come at me talkin bout how U like hearin tha sh*t cuz i aint even gon entertain that nonsense...we just in hear tryin 2 display talents and if i included some punchlines then sue me...this aint no LP nigga we aint gotta say it how u like 2 hear it we wuz just havin fun wit it...even twista said tha thread wuz nice last nite...so nigga im like who tha F*CK r u?? name one rapper thatz ill that dont use punchlines and dont even tryta comeback sayin "well thatz tha only lyrical element u use" cuz only about 40% of my flowz were metaphors i know wut tha f*ck i wrote nigga...
u done crossed a real lyricist nigga watch yo step in here...1
"rappers not from Cali like to copy 'Pac hella/
so in every song I give my 'state props' like Roc-a-Fella"
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1freshnicca i respect your opinion......nah im lyin because i cant respect your opinion if i dont respect your judgement and dat bullsh!t line you put in ya post and den said it was fire showed me exactly wut type of taste u have and now that i kno i dont appeal to lame nigguhs ill give myself a pat on da back.
lizame as$ nigguh here are some more punchlines for you
and nigguh I don’t run out when its drama I pull da gun out lay ya daughter and son out go ta parks and empty tha fun out u shook sayin why gifted had ta come out u should run now cuz its dark u losin sun now got guns now make u a spirit 4 u get one out picture me carin what anotha nigguh thinks cuz ill be on top b4 anotha nigguh blinks 9 times outta 10 the otha nigguh stinks so if u cant box freshnicca step outta da ring
quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1freshnicca originally wrote: no beef watsoeva niccas but i can stan when niccas rap bout thangs they aint got it jus sound bad. fo real n another thang i guess punchlines are a part of freestyle but wat yall doin isnt really freestylin cuz u thinkin then typin nah mean. rappers who really get props is who talk bout real thangs not so many punchlines they dun need punchlines fo they flow to be tyte like
whoa there champ yeah so what if im rappin about what i dont have im sayin what i will have(hopefully) and its not possible to "freestyle" typing unless u think as slow as u type...feel me... maybe mase or loon but not me im not gonna explain the process in detail anyway.....the rappers in the game....most of them cant freestyle anyway.....they spit rhymes they already wrote......look @ the booth big tigger had i actually have a little freestyle game.....when i listen to music on the bus or train i just freestyle over it and most of the time its almost as good as my writtens sometimes even better because its a natural flow
i talk about real things too.....as people will see these rhymes are for the board only....i dont go that hard for this...and i dont even save these
i love punchlines......sue me that doesnt mean that i cant rhyme w/o using them
as for that twista line...it doesnt even make since thug apostle that will pop u? but it has nuthin to do with religion collosile to fossil please.......that aint heat
but at the end of the day u got the right to your opinion u think my punchlines are whack 1. i think about something, then i have a punchline for it in 3 secs literally, its easy 2.thanks.....thats just gonna make me work a little bit harder
but please dont judge me....these rhymes are just a preview not anything i would lay down on wax so dont judge young foch cuz nigga u dont know-me
ey dawg i neva said nething bout ya punchlines...i said rappers in general..u know these rap boards thats all they do is say they freestylin when 90% isnt. u puttin words in my mouth i neva once said ya punchlines was wack or u couldnt rhyme witout em and i neva said u aint got a freestlyle game i dun even know u how imma talk shyt about u dawg...newayz ya ish that ya workin on daz u gonna lay down im guessin u pry wouldnt even put it on herr so ya raps on here pry say little bout wat u really tryna do wit ur game...nah mean...i wasnt tryna start no beef....n if ya read my otha posts i already said ya flow was tyte...n im sorry if u takin offence to me sayin that i dun like when people rap bout stuff dey dont have it wasnt directed at only u homie...every rapper..thas jus my opinion...
oh yea maybe dat twista line wasnt tha best example fo wat im tryna say but just tha point dat he dont use a bunch of punchlines n his shyt still flow killa ...dat Kill us all IS tyte or mayb it jus how twista do it ...dat nicca could say nething in his raps n it still sound tyte..
dez r jus my opinion not pointed at ne1 person so dont take offence unless u feel like u r tha person im talkin bout that has wack punchlines and rhymes and say they freestylin when they typin n all dat otha ish...ok
..ya feel me
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nigga u wuzzent talkin bout rappers in general so cut that ish mayn u said "y'all" nigga read wut u posted earlier...but neway i gotta get 2 class so nigga f*ck u and have a nice day
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